Independent / intergrated 모두 논증적 스타일로 쓰는게 좋다. Passage 언급은 간단히만 하고 반박 형식으로 작성 https://blog.prepscholar.com/argumentative-essay-examples

Integrated ex)
-> “A deeper dive into the circumstantial evidence suggests dinosaurs could not have gone extinct due to X, Y, or Z.
While X is logical from A, it is inconsistent with B. Since B contradicts X, extinction via X is unlikely.”

문체 전략

  1. 기본 구조는 명확하게 (서론–근거–결론)
  2. 단조롭지 않게 형용사, 수사법, 은유 등 사용.
  3. 같은 동사 반복 피하기.

예시 (문장 변형)
단순: “The notion that all plastic use can be eliminated is a lie.”
강화: “The notion that all plastic use can be eliminated is a naive lie.”
→ 한 단어 차이로 뉘앙스와 글의 힘이 달라짐.

Integrated essay 참조

Guide to the Integrated Essay https://www.toeflresources.com/writing-section/integrated-writing/

Academic discussion test https://www.toeflresources.com/new-toefl-writing-task-description-and-guide/

smaple toefl essay https://www.toeflresources.com/sample-toefl-essays/

writing templates https://youtu.be/PVjf9uPlX5M

오디오 부분은 꼭 메모를 많이 해놔라 노트 테이킹 샘플 https://www.toeflresources.com/writing-section/integrated-writing/

Task 1 (Integrated Writing)

전략: 저자 주장 3개 vs 교수 반박 3개

Intro: The reading and lecture discuss [topic].
While the author argues [3 points], the lecturer challenges them.

Body 1: First, the author claims [point].
In contrast, the lecturer states [counter].

Body 2: Second, the author suggests [point].
However, the lecturer argues [counter].

Body 3: Finally, the author asserts [point].
On the other hand, the lecturer refutes this by saying [counter].

Conclusion: In summary, the lecturer contradicts the author’s claims.

연결어 표현 모음

추가: Additionally, Furthermore, Moreover

예시: For example, For instance, As an illustration

반박: Refute, Challenge, Contend, Conversely

결과: Hence, Therefore, As a result

요약: In conclusion, To sum up

Task 2 (Independent Writing)

  • 전략: 주어진 선택지에 찬성/반대 + 개인 의견

In my personal opinion, [opinion].
I believe that [reason].

I agree with [person A] that [paraphrased argument].
I would like to add [my support point].

Although [person B] argues that [argument],
it is important to note that [my counterpoint].

Writing: paraphrase 적극 활용. reading passage 그대로 베끼면 감점

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